ilovewales (ilovewales) wrote in neo_ex_machina,


Hi there guys!
Well I've been lurking for a few days and thought I would join the party- hope you don't mind me gate crashing! I was told to always bring something to a party and so I have a little ficlet to share with you all, but first I'll introduce myself.
I'm Tia, I'm 17, I'm from the UK (beware British spelling! :P) and I'm very new to the Matrix. Very very new- as in I only saw it for the first time this week. There is a reason- my siblings are younger than me, so viewing has to be family friendly... *rolls eyes* (That's not fair, most good stuff is, but still...) So I have only seen the first movie, but I've read enough fic to know enough spoilers for the plot bunny to be born and cause this fic.
Anywho, I shall stop babbling and present to you my first Matrix fic (and my first explicit fic O.O)...

Title: Sensation
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Neo/Smith/Smith/Smith/Smith/Smith etc
Summary: Hands everywhere, every inch of him caressed by evil

He should stop this. This filling and surrounding, stroking, squeezing, licking, pinching. Hands everywhere, every inch of him caressed by evil. But how could evil feel so good? He’d anticipated pain, but the burning throbbing ache only matched his empty, needy centre. He would never speak of this. Not for fear of the opinions of others, but the lack of words- to say he was being fucked did not, could not, describe this. The word is too soulless to explain this drowning in sensation, of ghosting hands and mouths, causing pleasure all over, in previously unremarkable places. One would consider a cock in your ass to be a focus point, but with one in his mouth, and hands, mouths, tongues, fingers everywhere, he ceases to resist. Here, in the unreal world, he can surrender himself to the sensations of one man as many.

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awwww need more words!
are you going to make any longer version?
i think this could have a good story along with the smut.
Hee, thanks- glad to know you liked it.
I'm not sure I could make it any longer though, without losing it! I'm really bad at writing longer fics and I've never written something with more than one chapter :P
If anyone feels the need to expand it, however, they're quite welcome! BUt I'm not sure I know the characters well enough yet, let alone something that happens in the other movies XD
T x
Brief, but hot. *fans self*

I enjoyed this immensely. :)
Sorry it took me so long to reply- I'm gald you enjoyed it!
i recently read something describing Smith as a one man gangbang. you have confirmed this beyond belief. and i love you
I love you too? :P Thanks, glad you liked it.
And it's good to know that I wasn't the only one whose brain went "Smith? Clones? GANGBANG!!!" XD
Sad there isn't more of your fic ! (smith more like ! XD)
I'm glad you liked it! And, yeah, more Smith is always good! (I think they spoilt us with the clones- more Smith than we could ever possibly need!)
T x