Hi there guys!
Well I've been lurking for a few days and thought I would join the party- hope you don't mind me gate crashing! I was told to always bring something to a party and so I have a little ficlet to share with you all, but first I'll introduce myself.
I'm Tia, I'm 17, I'm from the UK (beware British spelling! :P) and I'm very new to the Matrix. Very very new- as in I only saw it for the first time this week. There is a reason- my siblings are younger than me, so viewing has to be family friendly... *rolls eyes* (That's not fair, most good stuff is, but still...) So I have only seen the first movie, but I've read enough fic to know enough spoilers for the plot bunny to be born and cause this fic.
Anywho, I shall stop babbling and present to you my first Matrix fic (and my first explicit fic O.O)...
Title: Sensation
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Neo/Smith/Smith/Smith/Smith/Smith etc
Summary: Hands everywhere, every inch of him caressed by evil
He should stop this. This filling and surrounding, stroking, squeezing, licking, pinching. Hands everywhere, every inch of him caressed by evil. But how could evil feel so good? He’d anticipated pain, but the burning throbbing ache only matched his empty, needy centre. He would never speak of this. Not for fear of the opinions of others, but the lack of words- to say he was being fucked did not, could not, describe this. The word is too soulless to explain this drowning in sensation, of ghosting hands and mouths, causing pleasure all over, in previously unremarkable places. One would consider a cock in your ass to be a focus point, but with one in his mouth, and hands, mouths, tongues, fingers everywhere, he ceases to resist. Here, in the unreal world, he can surrender himself to the sensations of one man as many.
July 25 2010, 15:35:00 UTC 7 years ago
are you going to make any longer version?
i think this could have a good story along with the smut.
July 25 2010, 16:55:22 UTC 7 years ago
I'm not sure I could make it any longer though, without losing it! I'm really bad at writing longer fics and I've never written something with more than one chapter :P
If anyone feels the need to expand it, however, they're quite welcome! BUt I'm not sure I know the characters well enough yet, let alone something that happens in the other movies XD
T x
July 28 2010, 17:31:22 UTC 7 years ago
I enjoyed this immensely. :)
August 4 2010, 22:37:04 UTC 7 years ago
August 17 2010, 16:08:05 UTC 7 years ago
August 18 2010, 15:11:23 UTC 7 years ago
And it's good to know that I wasn't the only one whose brain went "Smith? Clones? GANGBANG!!!" XD
September 11 2010, 16:05:58 UTC 7 years ago
September 15 2010, 09:05:26 UTC 7 years ago
T x